Wednesday, February 3, 2010

on the weekend sitting on the steps in a mall

a beautiful girl
really beautiful
so i look at her
she doesn't
i keep looking
still nothing
comes along a man
and she goes away
but not before
throwing me a smile
so i smile back.

11 comments:

  1. Is there any way to confirm that the girl was a female ??

    (hmm.. just considering the fact that she smiles back...)

    :-)

    But.. but.. BUTT , fact or fiction, liked it !!!!

    :-)

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  2. good observation abhijit.

    yes the girl was a female.

    and yes i used a little imagination. ;)

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  3. what can i do .. am a sucker for happy endings.

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  4. No, i like Karan Johar movies, only if it has Shahrukh Khan and/or Rani Mukherjee and/or Kajol in it....

    :-))))))

    Sucker Johar !!!!

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  5. i like karan johar movies only if they dont have anything to do with karan johar

    and

    rabi

    if this was a movie.. can i be the girl if u r the guy

    plz plz

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  6. okay madhu :):)

    but then i'll need you for all the sequels too.

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  7. aaaaaaaah
    bhave, am sure she smiled :)
    i would have smiled !! and madhu too!!

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  8. He He. One more guy gets high on suggestive smiles .. ;)
    does the poem end here?? I mean.. what happens next??

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  9. ab aapne kaha to hamne ek blogpost likh diya.. :) abt the travel..

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