the rain started in earnest
then suddenly stopped
as if it just remembered
"oops .. had to go somewhere else !"
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the little droplets
were up to something
meeting
breaking
falling off the glass
beautiful patterns
forever in making
never to form
as the twin wipers
wiped them clean
in synchronized fury
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wow :)
ReplyDeleteRabya the poet.. I love the expression " synchronized fury"
thank you thank you :)
ReplyDeleteguess i was feeling pretty ambitious today :)
may be my comments are not as sophisticated as your poetry .. 'laee bhaari !!'
ReplyDeletethank you abhijit for saying 'laee bhari' :)
ReplyDeleteand my poetry is not sophisticated at all. that is on days when i decide to call it poetry :)
i like to think of it more as a fragile form of expression which comes together rarely and barely survives the post creative self critical gaze. :)